This, right here, is the most amazing poem I have ever read. I really must exaggerate this point, for this poem touches me very deeply. I know you wrote this about you, and connect with it. But I must let you know, that every time I read these words and verses I feel such a strong connection. I almost feel identified, identified by the see. My element is water, and any time I am near the sea or ocean, I feel so free, and just...opened up and exposed. Like I am slowly cut open...I hope I can give you a visual of how I feel. It's like my soul, my emotions, my mind...everything, is split open...for the water to wash through it. To cleanse me. To bring me back to my element. ...wow...tears are actually coming to my eyes as I write this.. I want you to know, my love, that this poem means more to me than you'll know. I almost feel as though it was written for me. The sea is so majestic and mighty...no one can tame it. It has claimed the lives of so many, its almost as though the white waves that crash are the collected souls of it's victims, washing to shore, crawling to shore, trying so hard to reach the shore, almost praying to be reborn, almost to attempt to reclaim life. It's like the tides come in, tempting us to come play, tempting us to come near. So it may claim our lives, to add to it's collection, to keep it's waves crashing, and currents pulling. I really could go on forever. This poem is nothing but a masterpiece, written with true skill. The verses are so well sculpted. So masterful. I love this. Thank you for sharing this, my love, I know it's a very personal piece.

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wow, amazing comment honey, very descriptive, one of the best comments i ahev like..ever gotten, i am glad that it touches you so deeply. i don't know what else to say except thank you for sharing your feelings on this.

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



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peace in AMEHIKAAAH!

You're welcome. This just deserves a lot of credit. I love it.

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gorgeus work....really luv this shot...so magical

thanks, the shot was not actually taken by me, i have provided a link in the description of who actually took the picture, he is a wonderful photographer, you should check out his gallery

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peace in AMEHIKAAAH!

ok will do...and great strong poem too

This poem inspires so many latent feelings binded to an eternal relationship with the sea. I'm sure whoever reads it feels that old love bubble up inside and can recall their wanting feelings about the sea, it is cold and boundless and ready to swallow us up at any given moments. Great job Milly! I know you have a unique love affair with water and where better to turn...

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"By the pricking of my thumb..."

~Elizabeth Sage~

thank you, you give such good comments (how is your drawing coming btw?)

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peace in AMEHIKAAAH!

love. what you can.
hate. what you dont have.
feel. what else then.
keep. what you forget.
leave. the pain.
bring. a smile.
no even damned, not even forgived , maybe 1day. it will be your turn.
forget the past and live the future.
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i love your poem + pic.
sincerly. be happy life is short.
keep`it up. dont let other to dissapoint you.
ur the one and only.
and nobody will be like you.

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It is better to be hated for what you are than loved for what you are not.