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+Order of the Blood+ by ~GingerbreadxCoffin:iconGingerbreadxCoffin:





...watching her golden eyes as they shift around
looking from his velvet royal red curtains to his desk with a long stick candle baring a calm flame and some scattered papers, he steps forward and closes his eyes as she sympatheically looks at him...his muscular body, his long black hair with such a rich shine..."the longer you wait..." he interupted "i know..."  and slowly opened his deep red wine eyes and stared at her...staring at her lushes red hair her beautiful body he came forward to the night stand beside his bed where she lay and opened the drawer.  Out came a blade and he held it up looking at the glare it got from the light of the candle by his bed...as fear filled his body his name was said "Demascus..." ...silence...he felt the pressure of her hand on his arm now and he slowly turned his head..."...i cannot..." she stayed silent..staring into his eyes...she touched his hand as a tear fell and she layed back and slowly closed her eyes..."you know what you are to do...it is the way of your kind..."

...He brought his body fully on the bed beside her, he lay, as he hovered over her face and started caressing her cheek...she ignored his attention...a sigh came from him as he held the dagger up once again staring at it he noticed his hand was shaking..."Demascus..." he looked at her "do you smell my blood? it is the blood of your enemy, you can no longer betray your kind like this...you are such an honorable vampyre, and I, your only love, and your true love...a wolf..." he covered her lips with his chilled hand...he slowly brought the blade to her heart as she clasped both her hands around the hilt and held it away "no...not like this..." she took the dagger from him and set it aside as she moved her hair revealing her pale flawless neck...though his mouth was watering he felt so much anger for being this far, for loving her for this long...to only hurt himself in the end...he bit in...closing his eyes tight hearing her gasp, feeling her hands in his hair, as memories raced through his mind...memories of the dances they danced together, of the nights they shared in deep conversation, and the love they made in his bed...hearing her say his name in pleasure but now in pain as she held his blood filled mouth away from her throat..."i want you to remember that you had once loved my kind, and that you will never find love that i have given you...and that i am dying while carrying our child...and remember my name...lavydia..." as tears fell and she slowly faded into her eternal rest he kissed her lips that were once warm but now so cold with death, and remembrance of true love.



İMillieColclasure2004
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Author's Comments

I left a lot of description of these characters out because i wanted to let your own imagination fly with this, i would love to hear how you picture the characters provided, also i want to thank my sister thanks liz for the inspiration...~lizinthedark

stock for the blood moon...
~eccentric-stock

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:iconsynner666:
If I could find enough words to explain how magnificent and astounding of a piece this is, it would take endless searching to find them. This is so well written, the imagery...oh. The images that this piece projects in my mind just send me off, off--just..in some other world. Maybe it is in your wording, maybe your descriptions, I dont know, but it's something. You can never find writtings like this, out in the world, and when you do..they're just so..empty, it seems. I feel so much passion, and emotion in this, I was drawn in so quickly. This was just a privilage to read, and I hope that you'll write more like this. Amazing work my love, you are so talented. I love you :heart:

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:fuzzydemon:
:iconlove-poison-girl:
I loved it. Magnificent in description, and the way the charcters are left to be precepted in your own way. The plot is gripping me already, all that there is left to say is: Write more, and soon! :)

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Into the darkness,
Forevermore,
Until my soul can hide no more.:Mangapunksai:
:iconeccentric-stock:
Awwe, that is so SAD! But it's awesome, thank you for using my stock. ^_^

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Please note if used, thank you!
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
thank you! the moon was perfect

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



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peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
thank you very much, very nice compliment, i enjoyed writing that so much, i think i might have to write more maybe even a prequal..like how the two lovers met or something..hmm don't know..suggestion?

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



prints :pointl: :thumbsup:


peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
oh god honey, this comment is very sweet and full of such great commentary detail...? if that makes ense..lol anyway i am so glad that people took the time to read this, i really poured it out and let it go you know? well..you saw me so you know how destracted i was when writing this..and i really wanted to just keep my mind set you know? *is proud

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



prints :pointl: :thumbsup:


peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:iconsynner666:
:D You should be proud! This is just fantastic, and yes, I DID see how hard you worked on it, however...I must say, it didn't take you long...but that's just how talented you are ;D This is just amazing :heart:

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:fuzzydemon:
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
;) heehee thank you, you know how i write..i'm a mad freak..so :nod:

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



prints :pointl: :thumbsup:


peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:iconsynner666:
Haha, :nod: you mad freak you

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